The blazing 7 stars of Matariki :
Matariki a time in the year for celebration
when the seven bright stars blaze
in the morning sky
seven sisters glazing upon us
with persuasive eyes
wondering when set free from the skies
wondering if 7 more men
will hear their persuasive
screams and crys
to set them free
to persuade another day.
2 comments:
Well Done Jack. You have interpreted the story by Toni Rolleston-Cummings really well. They were very persuasive and manipulative weren't they!?
I hope you enjoyed writing poetry.
Mrs Parker
Nice sentence starter and I like the descriptiveness you've used.
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