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Thursday 26 June 2014

The blazing 7 stars of Matariki


The blazing 7 stars of Matariki :

     Matariki a time in the year for celebration
     when the seven bright stars blaze
     in the morning sky
     seven sisters glazing upon us
     with persuasive eyes
     wondering when set free from the skies
     wondering if 7 more men
     will hear their persuasive
     screams and crys
     to set them free
     to persuade another day.


2 comments:

Unknown said...

Well Done Jack. You have interpreted the story by Toni Rolleston-Cummings really well. They were very persuasive and manipulative weren't they!?
I hope you enjoyed writing poetry.
Mrs Parker

Lennyx said...

Nice sentence starter and I like the descriptiveness you've used.

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